everyday many day months or even years,
spinning and jumping non stop
losing track of time
living far pass a humans life span...
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Author:
shiro (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A music box playing the music though the owner died it still continues forever.....
- Category: Sad
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GREAT FIRST POEM SHIRO - Thanks for sharing. Love the structure - rhythmic lines which give the poem flow. It is like a SENRYU (5 7 5 syllables on human topic) in as much as it speaks of Man - whose days are numbered and compares his life span with a music box (which if powered) could play for ever. Like a SENRYU it embodies truth and wisdom. BRIAN
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