Don’t be like them; those who settle
for shallow labels and empty praises
Counteract; take gazes to the sky
See how nature echoes your potential
Limitless, yes, but delicate still
Spineless against anyone, even you
So influence the emptiness of others
Rise higher than your heart tells you
In terms of life's unstable race
the steady will never climb
and those who settle have already lost
- Author: landonthomson ( Offline)
- Published: June 8th, 2016 00:26
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 61
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AFKARISTO - Landon a challenging way to present a poem - transliterating the English into Greek script. I have transliterated it back to English and am pleased to comment ! "Don't be like them - those who settle for shallow labels and empty praises .......... This is a well pened and challenging poem because it encourages us NOT to go with the flow - but to be our own person. Counteract - - influence the emptiness of others - rise higher - BECAUSE "Those who settle have already lost !". Thanks for sahring - BRIAN
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