Blank is a canvas
Blank is what I am
I am nothing
In an endless hole of everything
I have nothing to give
I have nothing good in me
I am nothing of importance
I am no one
I am blank
But that doesn't mean
That someone
In that hole of everything
Can't paint a beautiful picture
A picture of love and happieness
Don't lose hope
Someone will paint you
A beautiful picture
And if you're impatient
Paint it yourself
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gertieisdabomb (
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WELCOME GERTIE - THANKS FOR AN INTRIGUING FIRST POEM. Self analysis is important ! In your opening section - I am Nothing ~ I am Blank - you sound like MISTER CELLOPHANE who everyone looks straight through ! I the closing section you exhort us to be a canvas for "A Beautiful Picture" and (I lke this) if no one else will piant it "Paint it yourself" - self esteem & self respect. A poem of two halves - I love it more please ! Yours BRIAN.
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