Blank

gertieisdabomb

Blank is a canvas

Blank is what I am

 

I am nothing 

In an endless hole of everything

 

I have nothing to give 

I have nothing good in me

 

I am nothing of importance

I am no one

 

I am blank

 

But that doesn't mean

That someone 

In that hole of everything 

Can't paint a beautiful picture

 

A picture of love and happieness

 

Don't lose hope 

Someone will paint you

A beautiful picture

 

And if you're impatient

Paint it yourself 

 

  • Author: gertieisdabomb (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2016 21:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME GERTIE - THANKS FOR AN INTRIGUING FIRST POEM. Self analysis is important ! In your opening section - I am Nothing ~ I am Blank - you sound like MISTER CELLOPHANE who everyone looks straight through ! I the closing section you exhort us to be a canvas for "A Beautiful Picture" and (I lke this) if no one else will piant it "Paint it yourself" - self esteem & self respect. A poem of two halves - I love it more please ! Yours BRIAN.



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