"Living today is like duying tommrow..
you try to unsee it but can't
the world In front makes you think
"all is lost and everything is over"
It leaves u left to think
about life itself
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Author:
liltayx (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It may be some misspelled words, I apologize in advance.
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Please comment! I need to know if I should continue ..
OF COURSE YOU SHOULD LILTA ! Short poems are always the best because they say so much in so few words. It would have looked better - spaced - and yes there are a few spellos but in Modern Poetry spelling is optional and English spelling (COLOUR) differs fro American spelling (COLOR) ! What is important is the content ! The message inthis poem is AWESOME ! YES in every situation we are "Made to think". Please keep writing "Poetry is good for the Soul !" and I promise to comment. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK 33),
I love the message that this poem conveys. The fact that your poem is so simple causes a really big effect. -Jaz 😊
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