I know a hero who doesn't wear a cape
But you should see his moves with a dirty old plate
His weapon of choice? A scourer or two,
My hero knows what he must do
Approaching the mountain of dishes, no fear
The sink full of water, crystal clear.
He dons his gloves, takes a breath
And plunges in at elbows depth.
Battles mould that's been sitting out for days
He shows no mercy, all he slays.
Every single smidge of grease and fat
Scrubbed away, thank heavens for that
The worst part is done and all that remains
Is the raw chicken knife, and the funny green stains
He pulls the plug, the job over and through
Wait, what's that there? A flipping teaspoon
I know a hero who doesn't wear a cape
But you should see his moves with a dirty old plate
The dishes have lost, our war is won
Until after dinner, when the gloves go back on
- Author: Louisa ( Offline)
- Published: June 23rd, 2016 17:15
- Comment from author about the poem: My boyfriend is really good at doing the washing up, which I hate. So he's my capeless hero!
- Category: Family
- Views: 97
Comments1
WELCOME LOUISA ~ A great first poem ~ Kitchen Sink dramas are always the best ! I can empathise because I too love to wash but hate to dry ! I have my own bachelor flat but I always go to my Mum's for Sunday lunch and always wash up for her ! Full marks to your BF ! Love the structure of the poem ! Five neat quatrains and rhyming couplets. The form ameliorates the subject. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
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