Rapid heart beating but do you know why?
Palms are sweating but do you know why?
Heavy thoughts keep me up all night, never been in this type of fight, light brown eyes that pierce my soul, to capture your heart was my main goal, but you were taken, not surprised but i was shaken, i was too late, to have you was not writen by fate, that wasnt enough to keep me away, feelings were real it made me stay, thoughts of breaking you up, i know thats pretty messed up, just know ill be here waiting, but i wont wait too long, yeah itll be pretty hard to move on, but i know im strong, till then ill just a write a poem or two, just for you
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WELCOME INSPIRED ~ thanks for your first poem. Love the shape and love the message. I'm 33 and have often faced this dilemma ! Love the resolve "but I wont wait too long". The title should be LOVE ON HOLD ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ BRIAN
hey Brian thanks for your input. yeah im 23 and still experience this type of stuff. "love on hold" does have a good ring to it.
A beautifully written poem, expressing the jealousy and frustration brilliantly.
thank you so much for your input!!
Hi Inspired,
Many will relate to this poem...some great lines. I found a rhythm in the reading and has the making of a great song to my mind. Love the ending..'till then ill just a write a poem or two, just for you. two little typo's 6th line. To keep 'me' away....final line 'poem'
Best wishes to you...and bravo on a great poem....Dee
hey Dee, along side of being in inspired poet im also an inspired song writer; im thinking of making this into a song. well thank you a appreciate your input it means a lot thank you.
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