Down this silly rabbit hole
You and I must fall
Down this silly rabbit hole
You and I must fall
But separated were we
And soon was I alone
Stuck in a room of locked doors
Can I find the key?
Tea time
Tea time
Don't you know it's tea time?
Wrong white roses
I must paint them red
Wrong white roses
I must paint them red
Blue caterpillar says I'm not nearly right
Hatter says I'm mad
Blue caterpillar says I'm not nearly right
Hatter says I'm mad
I'm mad mad mad
And now I do remember
Down that silly rabbit hole
I did fall alone the first time
Into my own little wonderland
I am quite mad
But all the best people are
I've lost and found my muchness
White chess pieces on a red checkered board
Can't beat me
Hatter says I'm just the right size now
Found my muchness somehow
I remembered what happened before
I fell down that silly rabbit hole twice
Once with you and once alone
Without you I was the right proper me
But when we fell you left me alone
And I was lost, then finally found
I think I'm better off
Alone in wonderland
Alone in wonderland
Tick tock tick tock
I saw you joined the bloody queen
Hedgehog croquet on green grass
Tick tock tick tock
You aren't the good kind of mad
I'm better off alone in wonderland
I'm the right proper me
I've got my muchness back
And this silly rabbit hole
Is meant for one alone
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Author:
Izzi Lynn (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 27th, 2016 15:00
- Comment from author about the poem: Hey I edited this poem today, and if you want to see the other version check it out at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/12750693-Rabbit-Hole-by-WhiteAshes# But I can't decide which version I like better.
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WOW SILVER ~ This is awesome ~ you have broken new ground and I absolutely loved your singing / recitation of your lovely poem. It gave it a new dimension. I have always loved Alice in Wonderland ever since I read it as a Child. I can always identify with the MAD MEN she meets. The Mad Hatter (my fave !) Doormouse (so sleepy) White Rabbit (always late) and Tweedle Dum & Tweedle Dee etc. They also resemble many of the people I work with. I think Alice is my perfect Girl and I fall in love with her every time ~ Alice in Wonderland comes up. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Thank you so much Brian, I know you've commented on a lot of my poems, and I really appreciate it. I also love Alice In Wonderland, probably my favorite movie ever. And I'm really happy you liked the recording I added to it!
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