The voices inside your head
The hidden old you, crying for help
Tears fall down your face
As you sit in silence, hoping for this to be the end.
The people who should be saving you
Are blaming you
But you hold on
To that tiny glimpse of hope
That won't let you go.
He says he's here, when he's not
How can he be so selfish
To leave you all alone
In the darkness, the emptiness
Alone.
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Author:
TheYoungPoet (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments2
WELCOME TYP ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. Nice structure ~ three neat free verse stanzas ~ each taking your story a step forward ~ sorry it's a sad one but it happens. S1. Crying for help ~ but hoping it will be the end. S2. Not being saved but blamed ~ still you hold on ! S3. Where is your Man when you need him ? Selfish He leaves you dark ~ empty ~ alone. This poem made me shiver with anger ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Yours BRIAN
Thank you xx
Allow me to add another ending:
Alone.It's dark at Home
Alone,with the cat on my lap
A week dead after you gone.🐈
Keep writing,as Brian(33-UK- Single) told you....
I found a poem that I wrote 3 years ago and won a school competition and decided to start writing again so I'm still learning. Thank you for the advice xxx
I won 2 school competitions more than 20 years ago and I am still learning....😯😁
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