Beautiful And Rare

Dee

 

Beautiful and Rare

 


When first I chanced upon his face
So beautiful and rare
My heart was left to longing deep
For I had love to share


But knew I well, he was above
All that I'd come to be
And so in haste I turned away
To hide my misery


For who would want a heart that wore
The scars of yesterday
That loved and lost and bled with grief
With each and ev'ry sway


It would take one who understood
One beautiful and rare
Was then I stopped and turned around
And found him waiting there.

  • Author: Dee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 29th, 2016 01:54
  • Category: Love
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Comments2

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Ohhhhhh DEE ~ Love all you poems they are so so fragrant. Love the silhouette just like you ~ Beautiful & Rare ! All you poems bring tears to my eyes (real Men do cry) and for this one "Tears of Joy". Your poetic fragrance fills MPS with Love & Peace. Four perfect quatrains balanced in rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and rhythm. True love (as you know Dee) looks into our eyes and sees beyond the scars of the past and sees only the beauty and promise of the "Pure Love you have to share". Another perfect poem ~ from a beautiful Lady ~ Love BRIAN

    • Dee

      Thank you so much Brian for your wonderful review and kind words.. Tears are good, I weep at the sad, the beautiful, the innocent, love and loss, but never as much as I do to know someone has harmed a child.. I love how you understand my works ..Thank you again Brian for the gift of such a wonderful review....All blessings to you my friend......Dee

    • Daniel

      A great poem that expresses our insecurity, The feeling that we are not good enough. You express the emotion well, loved reading it.

      • Dee

        Thank you so very much Daniel for your kind and understanding review.
        So very much appreciated my friend...I am happy to know you enjoyed the read..
        Smiles and Kind regards to you.....Dee



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