I Do Wonder Poem, by Eeva , at My poetic side

I would never, ever, never,

Kill myself of sadness,

To die at my own bloody hands,

And to leave the world I know.

But sometimes I do wonder,

What everyone else would say,

If I left this world I know and love,

And leave without a trace.

Would they go on with life,

As if I wasn't there?

Or would they cry and mourn,

And wish I was still there?

Do these people really care and love?

Or is it just an act?

Because what I am enduring,

Seems like a false act.

Would they be glad I'm gone?

Or would they speak nothing of it?

Will they remember me always?

Or forget and leave me dying?

Which is why I do sometimes wonder,

What would happen if I were gone,

Would they be depressed and lonely?

Or would they be glad that I had gone?

lysistrata June 29th, 2016 12:17
If you become a Mother, maybe you'd stop wondering...
Your child would need you.
My child needs me and keeps reminding that he needs me,and that gives me strength...
Thank you for your poem.
Everyone can relate to it.😃
Tropicana June 29th, 2016 12:57
this is meaningful and relatable, I guess we have some work to do on our relationships ..
BRIAN & ANGELA June 29th, 2016 14:15
Ohhhhh EEVA ~ I was sad when I read your poem. You are lovely and your poems are lovely and I am your Friend even though I am not registered as such. LYSISTRA and TROPICANA have also sent an encouraging comment so we are three people on MPS who would miss you ! You are unique ~ special and very very precious in your own Community and as a Member of MPS "If you were gone ~ we would be depressed and lonely ~ and SAD that you had left". I just called to say I CARE ~ Yours BRIAN

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