I feel my heart tear apart as I hear the lies you say.
How much longer can I bear to stay?
Maybe it would be better if I left this hole.
I was always stuck in just afraid to let go,
But maybe now it's time to be brave.
After all you've done it is the best choice.
But what if I just stick around wait and see
I've given you many chances one won't hurt.
How many times have I said that before?
I lost track you really did break them all.
So it's time to do what I've been afraid to all along
Now I'll see you later. So long.
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A great poem about the vicious cycle so many people find themselves in, and the difficulty they face in breaking that cycle!
Loved the poem!
WELCOME JOANA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Nice structure bristling with rhyme and rhythm but a poignant content. To go or not to go ? ~ that is the question that haunts us through life in our many relationships. Some seem to strike lucky first time while "true love" avoids others. Personally ~ when I find the joy has gone out of a relationship ~ that is the time to move on. Thanks for sharing ~ best wishes ~ Yours BRIAN
Hi Joana...Such an emotional and heart felt poem..Had me on the brink of tears.. When the respect for the other dies in a relationship, no matter how many times they profess to love you, for me it would be the end.. ' I love you ' three words so often bandied around without much thought . One would have to prove their love for me and respect comes top of my list.. I hope this work is nothing more than an emotional pouring from your poetic mind and not a true happening in your life my friend.......Best of wishes to you Joana.........Dee
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