To walk, to observe,
To smell, to taste,
To run, to swerve,
To slow, to haste,
To stagger, to strait,
To wait, to cut,
To love, to hate,
To write, to foot,
To buy, to sell,
To give, to receive,
To station, to cell,
To enter, to repeat,
To eat, to drink,
To see, to hear,
To do, to think,
To embrace, to fear,
To drive, to travel,
To remind, to foreshadow,
To observe, to flannel,
To believe, to re-saddle,
To enjoy, to boost,
To talk, to share,
To leave, to roost,
To walk, to care.
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Author:
AuburnScribbler (
Offline) - Published: July 5th, 2016 10:30
- Comment from author about the poem: I liked writing this particular poem as the rhythm of it is that of the sound of train moving over the tracks.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments3
WELCOME AUBURN ~Wonderful first poem ~ great rhythm. As I read it I was on the train with you to Nottingham a great City ! Great rhyme pattern (in most verses) abab cdcd etc ~ which added to the rhythm. Great choice of words many of them train journey related (observe ~ swerve ~ slow ~ haste ~ station ~ eat ~ drink ~ travel etc). The train really was your muse in rhyme ~ rhythm ~ vocabulary etc. I love this poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ more please. BRIAN
Great write, really enjoyed reading it
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To Steve Aoki
To Patti Smith
To Imam Baildi..
Thank you, Great Idea & Rhythm..
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