The coming day;
pushes the blue sky west over the dark valley, beyond the mountains crest
I left her down in Corazon
without forgiveness in the night
She was searching for the grace of God
She was looking for the light
I saw the devil dancing
Wringing up his hands
Conjuring his demons and
Rolling out his plans
The coming night;
pulls the blue sky west over the dark valley, beyond the mountains crest
I left her down in Corazon
Where her heart was lead astray
She never found forgiveness
And the devil had his way
I saw an angel crying
Falling from the sky
She said that she was sorry
She couldn't learn fly
The coming silence;
brings the blue sky to rest over the dark valley, beyond the mountains crest
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: July 7th, 2016 09:13
- Comment from author about the poem: Corazon is a volcano in S. America and it is the word heart in the Spanish language, for me this relates to the heartbreak of drugs, addiction, and overdosed death.
- Category: Forgiveness
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Comments7
MUERTE EN CARAZON ~ A beautifully crafted tone poem of life and love. Drugs and those who traffic in them are the Devil's curse on Society. I worked with the YMCA with Young Adults and I never yet met a hard drug addict over 40 they were all DEAD. When will we ever learn. Gracias por tu preocupacion ~ Tu Amigo BRIAN
Thank you Brian, very sad to see someone kill themselves with drugs.
AWESOME!
Thank You Tony36. I appreciate it! ww
You are welcome
A poignant poem, beautifully written!
this is powerful and gave me chills and inspired me to be a better writer.
Well that's very kind of you to say, I am happy that your enjoyed this and find inspiration in the art, for you are an artist and for that I am honored! thanks again inink! peace ww
I'd throw real flowers at you if I could.. 💐💐💐
Beautiful
yes it is a good poem on a bad subject! But I am thrilled that you enjoyed it! indeed ww
There's beauty in everything 😉
yes there is always beauty, it's just that some people are blind to it.
he one just for you!
In a dream I met my love
ye lords and ladies fair
minstrels strummed a melody
music floated on the air
a jested juggled flaming pins
while dancing with a bear
handmaidens serving bread and wine
the night was ever clear
I gazed across the fire light
her beauty beyond compare
then I awoke from in the dream
and found her sleeping there
Wow!
Thank you so much it's beautiful ☺️
I hope to post more on here, I've just been reading..
Yes I know so many poems so little time I look forward to reading you Thanks you
for the smiles and flowers and friendship I do appreciate it! ww
i found this showed how sadly beautifully vunerable the human soul is in the search for the answers of life.not all for the best.
strong words indeed.
thanks
I thank you my friend !ww
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