When Waking Up Feels Meaningless


Self-dignity surrenders to cause,

Giving up on the meaning of life.


No purpose can’t spark a dream,

So people hide in the isolated mattress.


Negativity controls the mind,

Leading to a state of depression.


The battle for happiness is brutal,

Fighting for the most important emotion.


Determination is the stimulate for living,

Starting with the first step out of bed.

  • Author: Survivor48 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 7th, 2016 11:52
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24


  • Tony36

    Great write

  • willyweed

    nicely done, good message, never give up! ww


    Thanks "S 48" ~ A great set of couplets which (if we are honest) we can all relate to when the alarm rings @ 7am ! However in my case as soon as my bare feet touch the cold floor ~ reality kicks in and a New Day dawns. Thanks GOD for cold floors ! Yours BRIAN

  • lysistrata

    Allow yourself to get distracted when you go to bed...and at least then you'd have a good reason of wanting to stay under the sheets.
    Better go to bed now,my friend.

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