It is easy just to remember the pain
To look back and see only struggle
Are we only defined by our fights
The physical mental and emotional
Or are they just an anchor
To keep us moored in our sorrow
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Daniel (
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you pose interesting questions in this well thoughtout piece. well done Daniel. write on! ww
Thank you WW.
good question indeed..
Thank you
"Are they just an anchor
To keep us moored in our sorrow?!"
PD James is a writer and woman I greatly respect and admire.I think she has answered to your question.
"Man is diminished if he lives without knowledge of his past;without hope of a future he becomes a beast". Or a Corpse,I would add...
Very true, great feedback. Thank you.
Thank you for your poem, seems like my loved one is actually going through what your poem is about..
I read your poem to him and it's got him really thinking..
Wow, what a great review. Thank you Alitaopal.
Thank you for your poem, seems like my loved one is actually going through what your poem is about..
I read your poem to him and it's got him really thinking..
Awesomeness in these words
Thank you Tony!
You are welcome
HI DANIEL ~ Sometimes when we look back ~ We only remember the rack ~ Where we were stretched again and again ~ W e only remember the pain ! Where there any good days ~ When we were happy fancy free ? I don't know but my mind don't show that any happened to me ! Thanks for sharin' BRIAN
Thanks Brian.
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