I will be waiting

AlitaOpal

I remember your strong hold, your chest I
rest my head on
Away from the noise and crowd, we are far
Far gone..

We lay on a raft drifting on the calm ocean
Staring into each other's eyes, no words spoken

Like stars twinkling in the darkest night, I smile one last time. As our souls take flight

For every life you came
And found me
The hardest thing to accept, we just couldn't be..

I long for a place where we can be free
From this illusion, where fantasy IS reality..

A body of a centurion baring scars of the past
Different versions of us that didn't always last

As I hold u tight my heart is breaking,
I'll always find you my love.. And I will be waiting..

 

 

  • Author: AlitaOpal (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 8th, 2016 10:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Dedicated to my love..
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 66
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan
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  • Daniel

    A beautifully written poem, great read!

    • AlitaOpal

      Thank you for reading Daniel,
      I too enjoyed your poem 'Self pity'
      ☺️

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME ALITA ~ BEAUTIFUL VISUAL and equally beautiful first poem. I love Fantasy and Fantasy poems. I love rhyming couplets they give a poem great rhyme and rhythm. In my experience most "love affairs" are locked and lost in fantasy. In my experience there is always also a lot of wanting and waiting and (thank God) finding ! Yours BRIAN

    • AlitaOpal

      Thank you so much Brian for your comment. It's been almost 16 years since I've picked up a pen to write again..
      Today I decided to join all of you in expressing myself through the art of poetry.
      I love fantasy and fantasy poems too. I've read some amazing poems posted today and I feel like I've come to the right place..
      Like painting, poetry is an art where any and everything can be expressed.
      Once again thank you for reading

      ~ Alita

    • Tony36

      Beautiful write

      • AlitaOpal

        Thank you Tony 🌷

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • PerpetualFlowers

          Wow, seriously this is a great poem. I apologize for not commenting earlier

          • AlitaOpal

            Thank you for reading, I'm grateful you took the time..

            Looking forward to reading more of yours 🌹

          • AlitaOpal

            I feel as though I am a prodigal child reuniting with my family again. I'm so blown away by the unique pieces of work published on this site. It's so beautiful and I'd like to thank YOU all for making it so..
            Glad to be part of this 💐💐💐

          • willyweed

            your poem is wonderful and graceful, good flow and structure and nice rhyme, I like it! welcome aboard and write on ! ww

          • isituorme

            A fine poem ,showing such a strong but fragile bonds. It's good because it's resonates in my mind ,

          • AlitaOpal

            Thank you for reading isituorme ☺️

          • rrodriguez

            Enjoyed it to the max.

          • AlitaOpal

            Thank you so much rrodriguez 🌹



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