Here i stand before you
With my arms opened wide
Free from all my stubbornness
Free from all my selfish pride
So please look upon me kindly
And look beyond my sins
Or are we forever stained
for all the things we did
And who of you among us
Is free from all mistakes
And which one of you among us
Is fit to judge us all the same
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Author:
Daniel (
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Comments2
Do you want me to JUDGE it as a piece of poetry or as a piece of didactism?
Correct your typo,add 'of' from where it's missing and get yourself a cup of coffee.
All critique is welcome, thank you.
Thanks DANIEL ~ Great poem for Sunday ! You worship the same God as I do ! The BIBLE says "If we confess our Sins ~ God is willing and able to forgive us our sins ~ and cleanse us from all unrighteousness ~ AMEN Only GOD can for give our Sins ~ Go in Love ~ Go in Joy ~ Go in Peace ~ Your Brother BRIAN
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