IF EVER YOU SHOULD LEAVE ME ~ DON'T LET IT BE ON:
MONDAY ~ 'cos Monday ain't a fun day ~ gotta work
TUESDAY ~ 'cos Tuesday is a news day ~ don't wanna be a jerk
WEDNESDAY ~ 'cos that's when I meet my friends day !
Don't let it be on:
THURSDAY ~ that's the worse day to end our love
FRIDAY ~ is my high day ~ so please don't make your move !
Don't let it be on:
SATURDAY ~ Crazy ~ mad as a hatter day
SUNDAY ~ God's Day ~ can't it wait 'til MONDAY ?
I know I'm just a GEEK
But there's no Day of the Week
That you could leave me up the creeK
Without an OAR !
Please don't throw me overboard
A few good points I know I've scored
And I'm very nearly cured !
So we'll just keep goin' next week
As we did the week before the week before !
Thanks for reading ~ Comments welcome ~ Yours BRIAN XOX
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 11th, 2016 05:13
- Comment from author about the poem: I really hate split-ups do you ? Now that I've thought about it ~ in my diary ~ there is no suitable day of the week to walk away from a relationship ! So we will just carry on ~ carrying on ! Love to all BRIAN XOX
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Comments6
Wonderful write
Thanks TONY ~ pleased you liked it ! BRIAN
Your not leaving much room in the schedule for her to go! Good fun write as usual. Thanks for sharing! ww
Thanks WW ~ Pleased you noticed that ~ The point I was trying to make was that NO day of the week was the right day for her to GO ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
Great poem very witty, great read!
THANK YOU DANIEL ~ I like to bring a bit of humour into MPS ~ now and again ! BRIAN
Nice poem dude!
Thanks 2AM ~ I try to do my best ~ BRIAN
And your best you show. I like it man! Can't wait to read more!
Clever!
GRACIAS RR ~ PLEASED YOU LIKED IT ~ BRIAN
This poem hits so close to home.
I saw your comment on the first one I have posted, and I'll have another up soon for you, with the same theme!
Thanks for your time sweetie (:
Thanks Rose ~ It is nice when our poems resonate and we can empathise. Poetry always bares our hearts and minds ~ Yours BRIAN :o)
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