Who am I amongst you all
Which of you knows my name
Who has looked beyond the skin
Freed from your narrow gaze
But what if you had tried
To see through others eyes
Freed from all your prejudice
Freed from your shallow pride
So try to see through my eyes
And feel the things I feel
Don't judge me with a single glance
Until you've seen inside my heart
- Author: Daniel ( Offline)
- Published: July 11th, 2016 09:55
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 35
Comments3
Thanks DANIEL ~ Open my eyes and let me see ~ you inside as you see thee ! God does not look on the outward (superficial) appearance God looks at the heart and sees the inner Man ~ so should we ! Well crafted poem in neat free verse quatrains ~ nice rhythm ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian
nice piece of work Daniel. Why are we so obsessed with our earth suits, do the astronaut's fuss as much over their space suits?
interesting write. and well done per usual
Thanks WW
Much truth in your words
Thanks Tony
You're welcome
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