Narrow gaze

Daniel

Who am I amongst you all
Which of you knows my name
Who has looked beyond the skin
Freed from your narrow gaze

But what if you had tried
To see through others eyes
Freed from all your prejudice
Freed from your shallow pride

So try to see through my eyes
And feel the things I feel
Don't judge me with a single glance
Until you've seen inside my heart

  • Author: Daniel (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 11th, 2016 09:55
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks DANIEL ~ Open my eyes and let me see ~ you inside as you see thee ! God does not look on the outward (superficial) appearance God looks at the heart and sees the inner Man ~ so should we ! Well crafted poem in neat free verse quatrains ~ nice rhythm ~ BRIAN

    • Daniel

      Thanks Brian

    • willyweed

      nice piece of work Daniel. Why are we so obsessed with our earth suits, do the astronaut's fuss as much over their space suits?
      interesting write. and well done per usual

      • Daniel

        Thanks WW

      • Tony36

        Much truth in your words

        • Daniel

          Thanks Tony

          • Tony36

            You're welcome



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