Going Through A Storm Poem, by jburtv95, at My poetic side

I've gotta get it all out

I've gotta clear my head

Even though right now I feel spiritually dead

I sit here in the midst of this spiritual struggle

Waiting for it all to just come to an end

And the sad part is I don't know where to start or where

to begin

How to let it all out and let it all go

And the truth is my real feelings I don't usually show

But I gotta try something

Even if it's new

And the strange thing is that I know I can trust you

You've stuck by my side

And you've been here through it all

Even though I may trip and though I may fall

You'll always pick me up and you'll never let me go

And even in my weakness your strength is always shown

You fight my battles for me, even when I run

And when I'm afraid and a little lonely

You pick me back up and you just hold me

You tell me I'm okay and things will get better

Just gotta make it through this storm and this patch of bad weather

Comments +

BRIAN & ANGELA July 12th, 2016 13:33
WELCOME JBURT # Thanks for an interesting first poem. Nice structure with good rhythm and ample rhyme to give it flow. We all face dilemma and indecision ~ but as you point out # a problem shared is a problem halved and we all need a special someone to pick us up ~ hold us ~ encourage us and help us make it through. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
willyweed July 12th, 2016 14:13
for sure two heads are better than one, I liked your poem and would like to read more....so get busy.
thankx ww
isituorme July 12th, 2016 15:24
Therapy in words,looking forward to more .all storms end then the sun comes out.

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