Heart Astray

BCR64

Gorgeous 

Like the Rainbow after the storm hits

Looking at her

My heart falling off a cliff 

 

Is this love 

what songs speak of

the idea that lingers in our dreams

she’s my angel from above 

 

I wish this poem could be about you 

My little angry shrew 

Forbidden love

Stuck with you my life’s askew 

 

She makes my heart race 

Faster than any chase 

The beauty in her life

Such perfection and grace

 

One life goal 

Pledge to you my soul 

Ignite my cold heart 

Like fire to a coal 

 

Alas, chance has passed 

Distance stands between paths

Wish it couldn’t stand in way 

In your hands; my hearts your clay 

 

Years went by; was afraid 

Rejection to set friendship astray 

Wish I made the move when could 

Left here now just a would 

 

Life’s become sad 

Deal signed in iron clad

Wish a perfect world exists

No reason to persist 

 

Wish this love could pass

Be loyal to my lass 

This came first

It’s here to last

 

  • Author: BCR64 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 13th, 2016 03:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Any questions just ask and I'll clarify. First Poem would love to hear feedback.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 57
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME BCR ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the structure ~ NINE neat quatrains with rhyming couplets gives it flow and vibrancy ! The content of your LOVE poem ~ seems to be between the enigma of the "Love you have" and the "Love you wish you had had" ! It happens to most of us and is beautifully expressed in your ultimate stanza ! Wish this love could pass # Be loyal to my lass # This came first # It's here to last. Sounds like Charles & Camilla ! It's all a question of "O Love that will not let me go ................... !" Yours BRIAN

    • BCR64

      Thank you so much for the support! It means a lot considering this is the first peom I've ever leaked to the public.

    • lysistrata

      Opposites are not the same for the same reason they are the same.
      I have a question for you to clarify..

      Take your time...

    • willyweed

      welcome ! your in trouble, follow your heart but consider the ramification's to all concerned. ww

    • Tony36

      Great write



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