She watched him as he slept so peacefully..
Touching his face gently with her hand..
Love had transformed her life so easily,
So sweet was life, so full and grand..
A love unlike any other she felt so free..
Far from conditional with no expectations..
His love for her she could feel and see..
I'll always be here no matter the situations..
Yes.. She replied whispering in his ears..
I promise to walk in love, always be true
To go through it all and face my fears..
I'll promise to share all my love with you..
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Author:
AlitaOpal (
Offline) - Published: July 14th, 2016 09:08
- Comment from author about the poem: I believe that the only promises we get to keep are the ones we promise ourselves..
- Category: Love
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Comments8
HI ALITA ~ Perfect picture ~ Perfect poem. Elegant structure and an elegant message of how Love should be. Transforming love ~ life sweetened ~ unique sensuous love ~ eternal love. Thank God is sometimes is ~ just like that ! Self made promises are always the best kept ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Your always welcome Brian 😘
a wonderful promise of love
great love poem you pen here Alita
Thank you hon, I love reading your work too.. The story on Katherina the ballet dancer is one I'm hooked on at present 😉
I agree with the others, it's a perfect love poem. Absolutely brilliant!
Thank you so much Daniel 🎈
Oh to have someone who cared so much ,lovely love poem
Damaged Soul ~ Thank you for reading
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