WE

RiaAnn

Put down your walls and let me in.

Let me help you shine the light within.

Take my hand and let me help you to stand.

I will be your backbone and never do you wrong.

Put down your walls by yourself you can't do it all.

Let me share your burdens and carry your weight

because together we can be great.

~RiaAnn

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Comments +

Tony36 July 17th, 2016 08:26
Great poem
BRIAN & ANGELA July 17th, 2016 08:57
WELCOME RIA ~ Thanks for a very positive first poem ! Let me in ~ let me help ~ take my hand ~ let me share ~ together we can be great ~ awesome. "I" is alone and sad ~ "WE" are happy and get things done ! Great structure and a great message. Love it ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
rrodriguez July 17th, 2016 11:56
Nicely expressed!

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