emotions like rivers
flowly yet rippling
gently yet lightly
as each wave flows
over each other
but yet my heart feels
none crushed and
destroyed by the
one women who
i cherished and
adorable yet
griped my heart
in her hands and
crushed it hard
leaving nothing but
blood driping to the
ground this one
person who i thought
would take my hand
and never leave my
side yet has left and
crushed my heart to
pieces leaving nothing
no emotions no regret
yet i sit and wonder
what became of her
why did she turn out
this way destroying me
from the inside out
leaving me on my knee
begging her please dont
do this please i love you
i shout and scream but
she just stands there
no emotions droping my
crushed and bloodly
heart on to the ground
walking away as the
blood runs and drips
away from my heart
LP™
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Author:
BlitzClank (
Offline) - Published: July 20th, 2016 05:47
- Comment from author about the poem: some thing i wrote after my ex ended it with me
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
WELCOME BC ~ Thanks for a very poignant and personal first poem. Love your slimline poetic form. It is free verse but pulsates with rhythm making it a compelling read ! One long heart broken unpunctuated sentence a massive "cri de coeur". That is how modern poetry should be written. I'm old enough (33) to have experienced rejection from one I cherished dearly. I would like to tell you ~ you get over it ~ but you don't. Best wishes ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
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