When I'm alone and by the ocean,
I see the waves in fluid motion
Its clear to me
The stormy sea
Mirror's my emotion
Wild beauty you can't control
Relentless waters pitch and roll
It's clear to me
The restless sea
Mirror's my own soul
Untamed unbroken no end or start
Destructive nature, living art
Its clear to me
The breaking sea
Mirror's my own heart
And as the sea
I want to be
Deep calm wild and free
- Author: Sam ( Offline)
- Published: July 21st, 2016 10:30
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 52
- Users favorite of this poem: elphaba993
Comments5
Welcome SAM and thanks for an excellent first poem ! We can all relate to the sea especially when we are young ! We are stormy ~ restless and breaking (fragmented) ~ and (deep down) we all want to be deep ~ calm ~ wild ~ free because "It mirrors our own hearts !" Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
I enjoyed reading your poem.
To write about the ocean is poetic.
Great write
Thank you all and thanks for the welcome.
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