the way she would laugh
hand resting upon my arm
smile warm and entrancing
she smelled of sugar and roses
her voice melodic and composed
i fell in love with her company
and while she would always smile back
she thought nothing of mine
- Author: caroline-o ( Offline)
- Published: July 22nd, 2016 00:56
- Comment from author about the poem: this is my first poem, so i apologize if it is shitty.
- Category: Love
- Views: 51
- Users favorite of this poem: Desaru
Comments3
WELCOME CAROLINE ~ Thanks for a delicate and lovely first poem. It happens and I also have some lovely Female friends. Lovely scent (honey and jasmine) melodic voices etc. I love to be with them and (in the main) they tolerate my presence ! I have lots of Male friend as well but my relationship with then is based on Man-talk not scent ! See my poem "Scent of a Woman" Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
thank you! i'll definitely check that out. 🙂
Great write
thanks for the comment! 🙂
Welcome
I don't think it was shitty at all...it was lovely.keep them coming !!!
thank you very much! i will. 🙂
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