the way she would laugh

hand resting upon my arm

smile warm and entrancing


she smelled of sugar and roses

her voice melodic and composed


i fell in love with her company

and while she would always smile back

she thought nothing of mine

  • Author: caroline-o (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 22nd, 2016 00:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is my first poem, so i apologize if it is shitty.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 51
  • User favorite of this poem: Desaru.



    WELCOME CAROLINE ~ Thanks for a delicate and lovely first poem. It happens and I also have some lovely Female friends. Lovely scent (honey and jasmine) melodic voices etc. I love to be with them and (in the main) they tolerate my presence ! I have lots of Male friend as well but my relationship with then is based on Man-talk not scent ! See my poem "Scent of a Woman" Thanks for sharing BRIAN.

    • caroline-o

      thank you! i'll definitely check that out. 🙂

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • caroline-o

        thanks for the comment! 🙂

        • Tony36



          I don't think it was shitty at all...it was lovely.keep them coming !!!

          • caroline-o

            thank you very much! i will. 🙂

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