The sun is slowly walking away
Gently kissing the saddened sky
My words hushe’d and unsaid
As I look at the melancholic, golden sunset
The hues of sun colors linger
As the dreary sea rests,
The candle-yellow and red-flared
Rays splash the somber sky
The pools of shimmering colors,
colors bursting with sadness
In my eyes, whispering adieu to
The veiled-sun in slow decline
The twinkling and dazzling of stars
Are starting to dance before my eyes
My spirit is quickened at such display
My God, My God thank you for the sunset
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Author:
rrodriguez (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The poem was written from my niece's point of view. She likes the sunset and loves to sit and enjoy it and the take it all in. To her this is a special moment in the natural world. So I wrote it for her and she just loved it so much.
- Category: Nature
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Comments5
Gracias RR ~ A beautiful tone poem ~ In my minds eye I saw every shimmering shade as the Sun sank slowly in the west. There are thousands of sunsets (and sunrises) every day and every one is very different. Yours BRIAN
This is gentle and well penned.
thank you.
Great write
this poem is so beautiful 🙂
Thank you all for your comments.
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