i see everything

he hits you day in and day out

he tries to control you

you try to make him not shout

you can only do but so much

he says he loves you but don't mean it

you take him back and fall for his tricks

and you need to know that he ain't shit

just listen up and beware

don't fall hard 

and love is not fair

i don't understand why you stay

if he don't treat you right

don't hold him down and don't stay by his side

he doesn't care for you 

why do you care for him?

all he does is hurt you

i hope you understand

just listen to me

listen for once

don't ever say that it's too late

we can stop him 

stop him from hurting someone else




  • Author: jazmine (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 22nd, 2016 09:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: it is very sentimental for me and if something like this goes on tell someone before it becomes too late
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 63
  • User favorite of this poem: elphaba993.



    WELCOME JAZMINE ~ Thanks for very challenging first poem. Domestic abuse is very rife and we should all be alert to it ~ Within our Families ~ Within our Community ~ Within our Country. It is usually Men (sometimes the stories make me ashamed to be Male) but as your video shows ~ Females can be abusive too. Loved the music ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • PerpetualFlowers

    Good poem with an important message, great job. I like the music you put with it as well.

  • AAA

    great poem!! love the pain behind the words, i really felt this!

  • hayley

    Love love love it IV been there I can relate

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