once a once upon a time there was a little baby that was born In Rockford,IL so I was like were was your baby born so she was like lasted night im like don't you have to keep your baby in the hospital so I hope your baby doesn't get sick I was wondering for four days then she said "my baby died" yesterday I'm very sorry about that I'm so sorry I wish I could do some thing for you I was very sorry about that then so then I said are you crying she said yes I said I'm sorry for you that you baby died because it was to early the doctor said he's dead the baby was dead.
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So So Bad Official (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was the first poem I ever wrote it is based on a true event that happened in my life I was only 8 years old when I wrote this and has been published in a book and online I'm known as a talented poet and also on the Hall of Fame on Poetry.com for the last 15 years.
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Thanks for sharing CSORG ~ A very innocent poem (you were only 8) and yet so so replete with meaning and understanding ! Great archive poem ! Yours BRIAN
Sad, but good write
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