BANANAS are a
curious fruit ~ yellow ~ mellow
wrapped in a banana skin !
PEARS are luscious and
always come in pairs ~ two by two
one for me one for you !
A KIWI FRUIT will
never fly ~ but it likes to
squirt you in the eye !
I like CHERRY ~ she
likes me ! But my only moan is
is her heart of stone
They advocate ~ just
five a day ~ so PINEAPPLE !
and I'm on my way !
Thanks for sharing my FRUIT SALAD ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
These poems are HAIKU with attitude ~ 5 7 6 etc ~ OK BRIAN XOX
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: In the SUMMER an ice-cold Fruit Salad is my fave DESSERT ~ What's yours ? I had one on Sunday at my Sister's after Sunday Lunch ~ WICKED ~ Love BRIAN XOX
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I enjoy your haiku with attitude. This is very cute and just the sort of thing I would read to my kindergarten classroom when we have a unit on fruit. We like to use all sorts of media to explore topics--art, poetry, music...
THANK SANDPIPER ~ HOPE YOU CAN USE THIS POEM IN CLASS ! Poetry and songs are great media for teaching kindergarten kinder. My intellectual age is about 7 which is why I like writing silly poems. Teaching Preteens must be one of the most rewarding and important jobs in the World. When you think of the millions that uninspiring people earn pushing money around. Primary Teachers should be paid £100,000 ($135,000) per year. I hope you are enjoying MPS ! Yours BRIAN
Well, Brian, I think it's kind of a gift you have. You could definitely publish children's' books if you wanted to, from what I've read. I will definitely save this and tuck it away for classroom use, glad you approve. 🙂
I love fuit. Great write
THANKS TONY ~ Remember FIVE portions of Fruit or Veg per day ~ keeps the Doctor away ! By the way JAFFA CAKES (Chocolate cookies) do not count as a portion of fruit ! BRIAN
I'll try to remember that
I agree, this is cute and fun and very creative.
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