You're a rainbow of multi-colors
a spectrum of beauty in the sky
As a flowers in the garden
you enliven my life
You're a prism of beautiful colors
cute scattering nuances,
your eyes shine when you smile
a smile immortalized in my mind
Your prettiness as the rainbow
in the azure sky is displayed
multiple colors of the rainbow
during the translucent day
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: August 4th, 2016 06:36
- Comment from author about the poem: playing with words trying to come up with something.
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Good that you have found love, I feel that way about a certain someone too. It is amazing.
GRACIAS RR # Arco en el Cielo (why is Spanish always so so poetic !). Love the poem you are a WORDSMITH and in your lovely ~ love poem ~ all the colors and hues shine out. Love ~ of your Lady ~ always stirs your muse ! Yours BRIAN
Thank you Brian & Shaunemc, you encourage me to keep going and continue my writing. I love this site.
I really like this poem. You did a wonderful job of using metaphors to display imagery. I read it 3 times I liked it so much. Keep up the great work!!
Jman, thank you for your comments. I'm looking to convey what's in my heart and mind the best way possible. Poetry is an art and not just making words rhyme. It takes a lot of work and editing.
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