Life is a just an existence
An existence that doesn't seem to matter at times
Sometimes you lose hope and want to give up
But something in you strives to survive
Survive, for the rest of your existence
However long that might be
Life is just the short beginning
The beginning of everything else has to come
Hopes, dreams, and love are the things that keep me going
Peace and stability is what I'm thirsty for
Someday I will achieve my goals and rest in solitude
With nothing else but my thoughts and memories
Read more at: Solitude Poem, by LillyDeRose, at My poetic side http://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-59846#ixzz4GX09jEGQ
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HI LILLY ~ Thanks for sharing an elegantly written poem with a well presented subject ~ SOLITUDE ! Solitude with contentment is something we all strive for. I love the picture you present of a LIFE of striving and surviving towards peace and stability through hope dreams and love ! I love the hope and optimism in the final doublet ! "Someday I WILL achieve my goals an REST in solitude ~ With nothing else but my thoughts and memories !" AWESOME this was an inspiration to me and I trust to others ~ Thanks ~ Bless you BRIAN
Thank you so much Brian! Your comment is very much appreciated, so glad to hear you enjoyed it 🙂
Awesome, Awesome write
Thank you Tony!
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