A year ago...
A year ago I wouldn't have believed you if you told me,
I would fall in love again.
A year ago I wouldn't have believed you if you told me,
I would do it with a guy.
A year ago I wouldn't have believed you if you told me,
I would end up pregnant.
A year ago I wouldn't have believed you if you told me,
I would be left abandoned...
I wouldn't have believed you a year ago. This year I would believe in anything you'll tell me
I would believe you if told me next year,
I would have other child.
I would believe you if told me next year,
I would find love again.
I would believe you if you told me next year,
I would ended up losing a limp.
I would believe you if you told me next year,
I would die.
A year can be a lifetime with unexpected events. Unimaginable outcomes. Take each year as it comes because your whole live can happen in a year.
- Author: shara_07 ( Offline)
- Published: August 6th, 2016 17:42
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
WELCOME SHARA ~ Tanks for a wonderful first poem # full of angst and action. As you say ~ anything can happen in a Y E A R and often does ! Thanks GOD we live one-day-at-a-time and can't see the future. I like the structure of the poem and the way you have spaced it to give emphasis to each line. We all learn through our own experience. I like the way (through hindsight) you have changed the oft repeated I WOULD NOT BELIEVE (in the first half) into oft repeated I WOULD BELIEVE ~in the second half ! Great poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Great write
nice job with this and welcome. ww
Thank you. Nice to be here
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