Love comes out of nowhere
But once you feel it
It sucks out your soul
Your palms sweat, heart races
No matter how hard you try you can't stop it
The first thing that comes to your mind is that person you long to love you back
But the last thing they think about is you
And that rips your heart into a million pieces
You ache and ache and just want to break down
Nothing seems to be able to feel that void
Those missing pieces
In your throbbing aching heart
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Author:
LillyDeRose (
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- Category: Love
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Nice job! I really enjoyed this
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Ohhhhh LILLY thanks for your dramatic poem. It throbs with passion and illustrates the difference in the attitude of Men & Women to LOVE. In my experience when a LADY loves me it is total Body ~ Mind ~ Soul. It is so so beautiful and yet frightening because the average Man (I try to be an exception !) is not wired like that. They love all aspects of the Physical aspect of love (ever ready) but fail emotionally and run away from total commitment ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
It was my pleasure sharing Brian! As for love, everyone loves differently, though yes there is a difference in a mans perspective of love from a womans.
-Lilly 🙂
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