PAJARITOS NEGROS
VOLARE EN EL CIELO
MIRAN LA BAILARINA
Little black birds
flying in the sky
watching the ballarina
SOLO Y CANSADO
PERO TRANS LA VENTANA
BRILLA LA NIEVE
Alone and tired
but behind the window
the snow sparkles
DOCENAS DE PALOMAS
ALDREDOR DE UN MENDIGO
Y UN TROZO DE PAN
Dozens of pigeons
around a beggar
and a piece of bread
Thanks for visiting ~ comments & corrections welcome
Besos y abrazos a todos ~ con amor ~ BRIAN XOX
All these are "HAIKU with Attitude" ~ BRIAN
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Spanish Haiku have an excellent "voice" due to their vowel endings. Say them out loud and compare with the English. I love Spanish Poetry. I apologise to the Haiku Purists that they are not always in the classical syllabi mode 5~7~5 but these are "Haiku with Attitude" ~ OK ~ BRIAN
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Comments2
Love it, great write
GRACIAS TONY ~ Spanish is a very poetic language and the Haiku Espanol sound beautiful ! Pleased you liked it ! BRIAN
I love the Spanish language. I can speak a little, and you are right it is very poetic
Very interesting Haiku in Spanish. I've written Haikus before, but not in Spanish. Have done a great job in Spanish.
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ Pleased you liked them ! I'm assuming you are telling me ~ mi espanol es corecto ! Hasta luego ~ BRIAN
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