If God were to ask me my heart’s desire,
I would ask that every drop of rain that falls
Be like thousands of droplets from my heart.
Soaking you with love & overflowing your heart.
I would ask Him that I can be with you
for all eternity because being with you
fulfills the greatest desire of my heart.
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rrodriguez (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My heart\'s desire for my girl.
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BINGO ROBERTO ~ Your catchy poem reveals that you have found the "Love of your Life" ~ which is what we all desire. I'm still looking ~ BUT ~ 2016 could be the YEAR ~ just got to decide between HAYLEY ~ MARGARET ~ FRANCIS ~ SADIE and JEAN ~ maybe 2017 ! Yours BRIAN
Don't be in a hurry. Perhaps HAYLEY ~ MARGARET ~ FRANCIS ~ SADIE and JEAN would find love with JOHN/BOB/DAVID/SUE and WillyWeed.😀
And rodriguez is Married,with grandkids...
Thanks LYSI ~ I'm not trying to tempt Roberto away from the "Love of his Life" But if the elegant Willy is looking for a Lady I would gladly introduce him to any of my Female Friends. The list of Ladies I posted are those (unmarried or divorced) in my wider circle of M & F friends ~ safety in numbers ! Sadly looking at the number of marriages that fail I feel I need to be 40 (2023 ?) to be mature enough and solvent enough to be married ! Do you think a Man is ever mature enough to be a Husband and a Father etc ? In the case of Ladies I feel most are mature enough by the time they are 21 ~ OK. How did you know Sadie was BI ~ she might make a good match for SUE ! Yours BRIAN
My poet friends, I enjoyed reading your comments and with a grin in my face I treasure your words. Thank you. By the way, I've been married for 34 years and have 8 grandchildren. I write a lot of poetry for my wife. But I want to share my writings with the world-at-large. Thank you!
nice poem RR isn't love great/sometimes! ww
Love is great, but as you say, "sometimes". But I have to add that to love is to suffer, too.
yes I agree there are many faces of love. write on! ww
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