She said that I was changing
I'm not what I used to be
She said she's falling off
And that was very clear to see
But girl I'm still the same
It's just now I've opened up
I knew that it was stupid
Girl just look at what I've done
We fell apart
I've lost your heart
Right now I'm different
Not like the start
You're overwhelmed
Im doomed to hell
For killing what we had
I'm always told
To open up
But now look what we have
Nothing
I'm empty
I've lost all that I loved
I did it
I opened
But it was way too much
I'm sorry for the real me
It was too much for you I see
I hope you come back to me
To get to where we should be
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Finding my flow again. Tell me what you think. As always thanks for reading! TAHB
"But it was way to much"
Correct the typo &
When are adding 🎼🎶?
I hope one Day you would write for the RED HOT CHILI 😨 or 👅
I love this one THB ~ because in my experience "The Art of Loving one's Lover" is all about "Opening Up" and sharing each others mental and physical intimacy. The rate of "opening up" is crucial and I have made the mistake of "opening up" either to quick or too slow or not al all. I am sure your Lover understands and will come back to you so you can open up together like the petals of two beautiful roses unfolding and coming together in love's perfection. Thanks for sharing ~ thinking of You and your Lover blissfully together ~ Yours BRIAN
This means a lot to me. Thank you for reading and understanding. Glad to hear that you enjoyed it. I'm young and I'm only gonna get better doing this. Hope you like my future work. TAHB
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