Be with me always,
my true love;
Timeless and ablazed.
Weeping Willow Tree
Majestic and sad
Old, weeping
Tears pour all about.
- Author: rrodriguez ( Offline)
- Published: August 15th, 2016 11:44
- Comment from author about the poem: Trying my poetry writing Lunes. One is about my timeless love for my wife and the other is about the Willow Tree so abundant in Florida.
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Great write
GRACIAS ROBERTO ~ Por dos mas LUNES (That' American haiku not Spanish MOONS !) Expressing your eternal love for your Spouse in 13 syllables is masterly. The W Willow is my fave. and again you condense its majestic beauty into a single LUNE. I have a new FUSION this week ~ MY FAVORITE FRUIT ~ Thanks for your RR Stanza ! BRIAN
Both of these works speak so strongly, in such short words. Great write. Thank you for your time 🙂
~RTBH
Thank you Rose
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