kind.adolescent

Broken hearts

Serene beauty pulling you in,

only to push you away.

As the fierce wind whispers a serious warning... stay away.

Their atmosphere portrays love and comfort.

In the end they are always left with a devilish smirk, and just know that

someone always gets hurt but this happens all the time.

This is just day one of the never ending cycle.

 

  • Author: k.a (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2016 10:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: I would like to think that the ocean is like someone with a broken heart. The ocean is beautiful yet dangerous, a broken heart usually seeks revenge and beauty can be painful. \"These violent delights have violent ends.\"
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  • Users favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA, thatsilentgirl.

Comments2

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    "Serene beauty pulling you in ~ only to push you away ~ And the fierce wind whispers a serious warning ............. STAY AWAY !"

    There are deep and fierce currents in the Ocean and the same istrue of LIFE and LOVE. We must make sure that we NEVER break another persons heart and try to avoid our own being broken ! In my experience people with broken hearts (for whatever reason) are in great agony and pain and revenge can be bitter often leading to injury ~ dearth ~ suicide. Please take good care of your HEART ! Thanks for sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN

    • kind.adolescent

      Thank you Brian!(: & you favorited?! (:

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        It's my pleasure KA ~ loved it ~ Yours BRIAN

      • thatsilentgirl

        So true. I think this is the best poem you've written so far

        • kind.adolescent

          Thank you!!(: Can't believe you favorited.



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