Very noisy in the playground

avigail

 

Social network is a huge playground.

Everybody  there  is shouting:

Im smart

Im better

I have power

I know the secret.

Tweet tweet tweet…

Bla bla bla...

Everybody responding, reacting , texting..

 

Very noisy in the playground.

 

When you close your eyes, at night,

You wonder: do exterritorials see us as a mosquito cloud? or just chaotic neurotic crowd.

  

  • Author: AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2016 08:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS AVI ~ For another challenging poem ~ concerning our day by day behaviour in the 21st C ! Unfortunately ~ most of us take it for granted ~ A swarm of MOSQUITOS is an apt metaphor. Thanks for caring ~ Love BRIAN.

    • avigail

      love, avigail 🙂
      we are part of the noise... th question, can it be harmonic melody? i guess its a bubble reflection of humanity

    • Tony36

      Great write very insightful

      • avigail

        thank u Tony:)

        • Tony36

          Welcome



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