Letters of the Sky,
Words of the souls,
Our Conscience,
Thoughts of Untold,
We control Our Brain,
But the Brain Has the Power,
We for all shall see,
Are just The Middle main,
How do we know we see what we see,
The Dark Clouds is an imagination,
Our imagination is not false nor true,
Just who are we,
The story is True The mind is True,
We control the brain,
Yet it tells us what to do,
We clockwork the clockwork of our clockwork,
-
Author:
calbreezy (
Offline) - Published: August 16th, 2016 20:39
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem means a lot to me, it is my work, it is my art, I try to understand that do we control the brain, or does the brain control we.
- Category: Short story
- Views: 117
Offline)
Comments1
WELCOME CAL ~ Thank you for a very philosophical first poem. Man (H. Sapiens) is a very complex creature with an interacting Body ~ Mind ~ Spirit.. Your poem focuses on the Human Brain. We are born a Tabla Rasa and as we develop we fill in our conceptual map with experiences ~ literacy ~ numeracy ~ manual skills etc. The Human Brain has an infinite capacity to retain and analyse and integrate all that we learn in Education and in the Market Place. As we mature (I'm 33) the knowledge and experience stored in our brains defines who and waht we are in the Community. It is a symbiosis between our "control" of our brains and our brain's "control" of us. BUT we are not ROBOTS we all have free will and must strive to be the Masters of our own Destinies. When the vital link between a "Man and his Brain" ceases to function "Alzheimers" that is a living death. We must ~ at all costs ~ value and protect our BRAINS ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Oh wow, my mind is blown, thank you very much for the response,
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.