Another Long Ass Night

Doll in Wonderland

What did I ever do to you? 

Besides try to fall in love with you, and fail

You are unlovable

All thorns and rusty metal, piercing my skin

When I just wanted to put my arms around you

And hold you tight

Cutting my hands up 

On all your snarky comments and put downs 

Like shards of glass

When i just wanted to see what my hand in yours feels like

I saw too much good and kind in you

Through my rose colored sunny disposition

Where there was none to find 

You really are an asshole

I was so blind 

Now I see what everyone else told me they see

And I'm so sorry to have wasted my time 

And my efforts on you 

The nicest thing you ever did was leave me 

All touching my face

And smiling

I hope you are alone and lonely

Living with your mother on her sunporch

And I hope she eventually kicks you out

So maybe you'll grow up

You are all 1996

Twenty years and you are still the same person you were then

So fucking boring 

And I'm still laughing at your wallet chain

Good luck finding a girl 

Who loves 1996 and death metal as much as you do

Who doesn't work so she can play PS4 all day and night

Who's a loser like you

For all the pain and frustration you bring

At least the sex was good

I just want my stuff back and to forget about you. 

 

 

  • Author: Doll in Wonderland (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2016 22:16
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 36
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    HELLO DOLL ~ You make some interesting comments in this HARD HITTING POEM ! 20 YEARS is a long time to be in a relationaship and I guess you know a lot about a GUY by then ~ the Good ~ Bad ~ Ugly. Your penultimate line raises a question about the importance of SEX in a relationship. "At least the sex was good." However it seems that if the man is boring and unaffectionate the "good sex" is not enough. I always like to satisfy my Lady and in return I like sex to be a memorable and positive experience but to form a lasting and loving relationship it is only one of several important factors. I'm still single and your poem has made me think. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

  • giantgentlebear

    enjoyed reading -last two lines made me smile- thanks for words

    • Doll in Wonderland

      Thank you 🙂 Sometimes I'm funny 😉



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