An Authentic Love

MarisaGreen16

Slam Poem :written by a genderqueer in love 

I never thought that someone could truly undestand me ,to fully accept me ,yet complete me in an extrordinarily beautiful way  but i guess what I first anticipated was wrong  

In a place where I felt so trapped in my own mind,I didn't realise because the darkness I was enclosed in for so long somehow kept me from finding them ,that person being " the one" who rescued me from my invisible prison of loneliness 

Now that place is one I wish to never ever have to enter again.  It's dark ,very dark ,unexplainable ,it's a lonely place which nobody should have to be imprisoned in ; darkness .

I sought comfort and that's what they provided ,an escape from my once dark corner, which is now lit with the beaming light of freedom and happiness .Butterflies were unchained just in the presence of them .

How one person could help me in so many ways is amazing the feeling of happiness projected from my radiant glow, that feeling was love .An authentic love ,a love that I had never experienced before .

  • Author: MarisaGreen16 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 18th, 2016 18:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: I am Genderqueer and This is my slam poem i wrote about my love at first sight destined crush and a person who didn't realise how much they helped me and made me strive to become a better person.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 39
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Comments1

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME MARISSA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ A SLAM POEM ~ It is very very powerful and a lovely tribute to Transgender Love. I love transgender poems they are so so tender and always from the heart. Your passionate poems fulfills all the elements of a SLAM ! It is : Original ~ Compact ~ Basic and recitable ~ rhythmic and passionate and powerful. I have to give it a score of TEN ! We all need LOVE Marisa and when we find it ~ in all its glory ~ we want to shout it from the housetops ~ you did ! Love your poem ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

    • MarisaGreen16

      Thankyou so much ! That really means alot.



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