I was flicking through pages of unfinished poems ,whilst flicking through words and lines ,my eyes fell upon a certain line :I never thought I was truly extraordinary, now that line made me angry to write that but not remember when I wrote it I know what i write vent what I feel ,
Worthless,useless, empty but there are times before that times where my confidence exceeded my size ,times before the the bad and stuff before my heart was smashed and broken against shards of rock, before I tore apart and ripped my skin.Before that I thought I was wonderful .
Loud and proud ,always speaking my mind; some people thought I was obnoxious but the people who loves me did because I was genuine.
Never doubted myself,my true colours always shining and they were bright and violent ,there colours clashing against eachother in a way that was beautifully chaotic And I was happy despite that everlasting pain of never knowing excactly who I was meant to be ,who I was meant to love ther pain felt deep within my soul constently throbbing at my heart . But I just wanted to relive the times where I was sad ,worthless , and less than ordinary
Before acted differenr around certain people but then i realused that can change ,I can change ,I will break free from my shell that once held me back like a butterfly breaking free from its cocoon ,patterns and colours shining brighter than ever And then patterns of a mis-matched rainbow ,which I will forever present in my presence
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MarisaGreen16 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Slam poet Dia davina has always been a huge inspiration to me and i wrote this poem as one of my inspired peices .
- Category: Reflection
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Its a really nice poem..I loved when you used the words beautifuly chaotic. Thank you for sharing.
Thankyou so much for you kind comment
WOW MARISA ~ Another fantastic SLAM ~ you are a blessing to this site. Love your vents ~ they let out your steam ! Your language is very powerful as you self-examine your development as a poet and as a person. Love the fact that you never doubted YOURSELF and your true colours always shone bright and violent ~ beautifully chaotic. We can all change MARISA we are dynamic we are SLAM.. Rainbows are so so predictable always ROYGBIV or VIBGYOR. You are a vibrant Free Spirit and I love "Patterns of a mis-matched rainbow" wicked ! Thanks for sharing ~ keep riting ~ You are lovely ! Please check my poem ME SLAM POET ~ I gave you a mention. Yours BRIAN
Thankyou so much for your extremely constructive feeback I'm so glad that you like it, I'm very honoured ,
Thankyou so much ,I'm going to read it now x
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