2 am/you are heavy on my mind/especially placed within my heart/love so divine/something that will stand a lifetime/no end in sight/infinite lifeline/beauty of you/outside and in/to describe the happiness tou make me feel/i don't know where to begin/i do know I'd die/if you ever went away/i pray you will stay/until my dying day.
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Author:
Quietstorm_Dru (
Offline) - Published: August 19th, 2016 11:19
- Category: Love
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WELCOME DRU # Thanks for your first poem ~ we all love a LOVE POEM and especially one as sincere as this ! The structure and spacing of the poem is good with sufficient rhyme and rhythm to make it flow ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
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