My hands are tied
Im gaged and bound
I want to scream i want to shout
Cant make the words come out
Cant make a sound
Feeling helpless feeling vunerable
Anyone could shatter me in one move
Fragile and simple, i want to run, i want to fly
Im gaged, hands tied, just let me gi
No point holding me back
Tears are gone, im free inside
All the fears subside
Unbind my chains let me run let me go.
Im to far gone to back
All those befores all the yeaterdays
Are gone, no more, i refuse to hide
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Author:
illia (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 19th, 2016 13:03
- Comment from author about the poem: My first ever printed made public for all to read i hope its a good read for all enjoy
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Comments1
WELCOME NACTON ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem, Well structured with lots of rhyme and rhythm which gives it flow. The title and the content suggest the necessary restrictions imposed on us when we are Children. It also hints that some of the restrictions don't disappear when we turn 18 but remain "against" all our life ! Like you I WANNA BE FREE ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
Thankyou so much on your thoughts of my poem much appreciated. Its the first time anyine has ever let me know how they felt when reading. Its great thankyou so much for you positive input. Very close to the mark. 😆😆
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