nothing

lonelygirl123

i looked in the mirror but saw nothing

just a piece of dust 

i starred in the mirror wanting to break everything

but instead i just broke down

i looked at my self to try and convince myself that i was enough 

but they just pulled me down 

they pulled me down into a pit of sadness and tears 

i lost self control and couldn't do it anymore 

i cant do it anymore

i cant hold every piece of me that they break off 

it wouldn't be bad if they told me they didn't love me

what is bad and that really breaks me apart 

is that they say that they do. 

but its not true

 

  • Author: lonelygirl123 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 22nd, 2016 20:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: i know its not really a poem but its more of a free write im not in the best time right now sorry if you are bored
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 38
  • Users favorite of this poem: JohnThomas
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments3

  • JohnThomas

    I think we all have been there. It's not easy to share such feelings.
    Thank you for sharing what's in your heart. I hope things get better for you.

    • lonelygirl123

      thank you but the thing is you wouldn't think anything was wrong with me and i was just being selfish but it really doesn't matter about what is in the outside only the inside

      • JohnThomas

        Very true. Sadly too much is placed on what we think we see and not what is really there.

        • lonelygirl123

          thank you

          • JohnThomas

            You're welcome 🙂

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            WELCOME LONELY GIRL ~ Thanks for sharing a personal poem which has made us think. Mirror Mirror on the Wall who is the ?????? of them all. I'm a single guy (33) so I see potential and opportunity. But I only see what i want to see and in many respects like you I'm hurting intside. People (and the mirror) only see the exterior and the face we choose to put on. We (and GOD) know what's on the inside and it hurts especially when people hurt us with their lies. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

          • Mads

            I have been there and still am there. I try to tell myself that I am enough but I still can't seem to believe it...

            • lonelygirl123

              That is exactly how i feel. Some people just don't understand the pain.

              • Mads

                Could you be my friend on here? I feel like we could relate with our poems.

                • lonelygirl123

                  Totally!!



                To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.