Yin and Yang,
Mind and Soul,
Balanced,
On a middle road,
Between,
Good and Bad,
Right and Wrong,
Where,
No thing matters to spirit,
All things matter to man,
Catch a glimpse,
Feel it rise,
Then let it go,
We don't know,
Breathe,
Open and Closed,
High then Low,
Within is Without,
Then let it out,
Relax,
Light and Dark,
Life and Death,
Falling away,
Dancing shadows,
Hidden depths,
Peace.
Total surrender,
To what is,
To what I am,
and to what I always was.
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Author:
daniel dawes (
Offline) - Published: August 25th, 2016 00:08
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments4
Wonderful write
Oh Daniel,
You make me say things that I'd rather NOT...
Have you spend 10 years of your precious life,writing this staff?😯
Let me put it differently;
Do you give 'The Same Performance" with every sexual partner?! Because if you DO,then not everyone has an Orgasm....😱
But I do like the photo very much....
Hi Lysistrata,
You've made it personal once before........Funny your mind went to my sexual parnters......interesting where the mind takes some people!!!!!! I stand by my work and the deeper meaning, I apologise if it made you think of sexual stuff and me!!!!!!
"parnters":Typo?
You write about mind versus BODY.
If your Poetry is spiritual,
I,tried to represent 'The Body' And analyse you how it reacts to your Spiritual Approach.
It stays INDIFFERENT👎
That's ALL.
Not at all.....its about balancing mind, body and spirit. Everything being part of the whole......I get now what you thought you were showing me. Thanks for the comments anyway 🙂
Balance and equilibrium ~ Yin & Yang ~ Good & Bad ~ Right & Wrong ~ Life & Death ~ this is what I strive for a BALANCED LIFE. I can cope with Bad because I have experienced Good and will again. The same is true of Right & Wrong. I know I am alive because I am writing a comment on your elegant poem. I know I will die but I consider that @ 33 I am only one third into my life and I would be happy to live (DV) until 2082 ! I am not afriad of the negatives because they balance the positives (c'est la vie) and I'm not afraid to die because my Faith (Christian) is very positive about Heaven. Thanks for sharing ~ I like to be balanced. Love the photo which defies gravity and maintains balance. BRIAN
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