Welcome to my life,
Where all the clouds are grey,
And nobody cares about what you have to say.
Where your heart's always in pain,
And they just label you "insane".
Where you're left to sit and think,
'Til you're scared to even blink.
Where love becomes torture,
And you can never be so sure.
Where nobody ever trusts you,
Because of the littlest things you do...
If you wanted to die,
They'd probably think it's a lie,
But welcome to my life,
Where they'd actually hand you the knife...
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Author:
Mads (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this last night because I was very depressed and distracted myself from cutting.
- Category: Sad
- Views: 109
- User favorite of this poem: JohnThomas.
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Comments6
Very powerful. Very moving. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your world.
Ohhhhh MADS ~ This is so so sad it made grown Man cry. Your picture reflects your dispair and your heartache. I'm still waiting for the happy poem Angel ~ You said you liked MPS because everyone was so so nice and welcoming ~ we all love you. What is it (or who is it) t ? that makes you so so sad and self-harming. You are beautiful and smart and an excellent poet ~ you have a great future ! Don't let someone ruin your life. You have all of us now ~ thinkin' of you ~ prayin' for you and lovin' you ! Love & Hugs ~ Your Friend BRIAN
sad message,nobody even knows to exist ! you are a great writer!
I notice you. And most importantly GOD notices you. It always hard to see that the pain that is allowed is part of a bigger plan. Him that waits on the LORD shall renew their strength. Remember there is power in the name of JESUS. I had to learn that myself. To feel alone is to give in. Always encourage yourself. Your writing is so beautiful because of the rawness. Think, of how amazing it will be once you decide to smile again. YOU ARE LOVED.
Hello I'm from England and I have just signed up to this web site and I stumble across this poem you wrote. It's hard to believe you are only 15. I have had similar feelings in my life especially when I was 15 and I have struggled with depression and still do but two years ago I discovered a pation for sailing and the sea, for nature and mountain climbing and you can't possible images how much it's help. I realised there is happiness and fun in life but it's up to you to discovere what brings you peace be happines. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
I think this is my favorite, i think ppl write when your emotions are the strongest.
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