I feel trapped
Like I'm on an elevator going the wrong way
And suddenly it stops half way and there Is no escape
From this unwelcoming place
The doormat reading " welcome to hell"
The people make the lounge an unshared space
Whilst Im locked away in a room of grey walls
Enveloped in darkness
Whilst wild emotions stab my back
And then they leave me alone at rockbottom of my thoughts to fend for myself
alone in my own mind
Which nobody would ever be able to understand
And that elevator seems to be slowly collapsing down
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Author:
MarisaGreen16 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I just wanted to express some of my emotion right now and this is what i came up with i did not plan it I just wrote what I felt as soon as I felt it If you want to see more of me follow me on instagram: marisa_greenx1
- Category: Reflection
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I appreciate your thoughts and i would love any feedback
Thanks for sharing MARISA ~ Trapped halfway ~ between a rock and a hard place ~ that is how a lot of us feel ~ sometimes ! So your poem strikes a chord ! Unwelcome ~ unshared space ~ wild emotions ~ misunderstood ! Sometimes we think it can't get any worse and it does. Life is full of aftershocks and then the ground fall from beneath our feet. Thinkin' of you ~ BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Ebony Girl ~ THANKS.
Thankyou so much , I will read it now x
Great write
Thankyou
Welcome
you have captured a feeling/emotion we all have had at times. nicely done in form and structure! ww
Thankyou xx
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